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Through the Cracks (1): Writing CHAOS THEORY

Posted in Original Writing, Updates with tags , , , , , , , , , , , on March 18, 2016 by smuckyproductions


It has been nearly four years since I began writing a script without a title, which would become my first feature-length effort, and in 2014 would be shot as “Chaos Theory.” Several dead-ends, drastic rewrites and many cuts later, the process is still vivid for me.

The idea was born from a combination of H.P. Lovecraft and the news. I had been reading Lovecraft obsessively during the summer of 2012, falling in love with his dread-filled execution and massive, rarely-glimpsed monsters. There was a movie somewhere in those stories. But the idea was half-formed and bland – until something catastrophic happened.


Being a Denver native, the Aurora movie theater tragedy was immediate and frightening for me. But the news coverage was even more disturbing. We were seeing this act of violence sensationalized, fictionalized, and made almost exciting. But the grief of those around me was so much more real than that. It felt chaotic, unearthly, to witness all of this, at an age when I still couldn’t really comprehend it. Lovecraft’s monsters, however, seemed akin to the nightmarish aura around these events and the news. Those two elements combined and thus my idea was born.

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The then-untitled “Chaos” began with a male protagonist who becomes obsessed with his neighbor’s suicide – then named Edgar, rather than a friend. His teacher, not his psychologist, unveils the ideas of Chaos and its apocalyptic implications. The frame resembled a bastard child of “Donnie Darko” and “Black Swan.” Many of the scenes are similar, though the bulk of the action took place in a school, and the ending was much more literal. It was far from ready for the screen.

My freshman year at NYU brought about the needed changes for the script. Many of my professors, mainly Pete Chatmon and John Warren, were kind enough to read it and offer invaluable advice. What if, instead of his neighbor, it’s his friend who dies? And what exactly are you trying to say? These questions and many others streamlined the ideas into something closer to the final version. The story was getting stronger.

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But, in its current form, it needed a larger budget to complete. Filming in a school is expensive, and there were several visual effects involved. I did my best to raise the necessary funds, but I was eager to tell this story – the media was getting more disturbing and random acts of violence seemed to occur every day. Thus, a rewrite for budget was called for. The school became a playground, the visual effects became practical images, and the story came to the forefront.


Around the same time, I was also searching for a lead actor to take on the role of Aaron. My friend and high school classmate Kat Solko was set to play Sophie. But a stale search and a change of perspective made it obvious: the protagonist can be a woman, and Kat is more than up to the challenge. All that I needed to do was change the pronouns. And with that, “Chaos Theory” had reached the finish line.

That, boils and ghouls, is the spoiler-free timeline of my writing process. Stay tuned for the next chapter – the wonderful madness of pre-production.


Stories for HALLOWEEN That You Can Read Online

Posted in Halloween with tags , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , on October 1, 2015 by smuckyproductions

Happy 1st of October, horror fans!

As the chill wind blows and the spirits creep forth, it’s important to have an arsenal of spooky tales to spin by the fireside. For the first section of October recommendations, I’ve assembled a collection of short stories that ooze the autumn atmosphere and send shivers up the spine – all in the public domain, and easily accessible online. So cozy up by the fire, lock your doors, and settle in with these STORIES FOR HALLOWEEN.



You can’t go through October without indulging in Washington Irving’s lush, warm world of Tarrytown. This is a story for the senses – Irving describes the scent of the air, the texture of the autumn foods, and even the quality of light with relish. Combine that with a terrifically fun and creepy myth, and you’ve got the perfect (family-friendly) Halloween yarn. Purely for the sensory delights, this one is a must.



What’s autumn without some late-night Sabbaths? Trauma from high school lit class aside, Nathaniel Hawthorne is worth celebrating for this richly atmospheric and disturbing story. This is one of my favorite depictions of the devil, and, like the best Hawthorne, it raises nasty concerns about Puritan values. Without spoiling the fantastic ending, I’ll just say this tale is the perfect witchy spookfest – and also makes us question what we know about our neighbors.



Got to have a good old Gothic breakdown on this list. Charlotte Perkins Gilman weaves a simple but utterly nightmarish world in which the female narrator, confined to a single room with hideous wallpaper by a husband who thinks she’s insane, becomes convinced that there are women in the walls, trying to escape. Psychologically and visually, this story is beyond disturbing. But its fabulous Grand Guignol house setting makes it a perfect tale for October.


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You can’t have a Halloween list without a bit of Poe. While there are many stories to choose from, this one has always been my favorite. It reads like an archaic fable, beautifully described and slowly mounting in tension, before a climax of shock and violence. This is a costume party gone horribly wrong. Hopefully that doesn’t happen to you this season, but regardless, this creepy morality tale is ideal at the stroke of midnight.



Again, an author often cited. But H.P. Lovecraft outdoes himself with this cosmically frightening story of netherworld beasts and their human servants. Like Washington Irving, Lovecraft evokes his town of Dunwich with perfect attention to atmosphere, and it serves as a flawless setting for the horrors that commence. Full of unhallowed rituals and nightmarish creatures, this story captures the sentiment of Halloween exquisitely. And, to boot, it’s terrifying.


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Most of M.R. James’s stories were designed for dark winter nights, but I find this classic is better suited for October. Like all of James’s work, it begins with a benevolent protagonist who uncovers a hidden mystery – but the horrors extend beyond simple spectres, because the titular phantom is so malevolent. Graveyards, knotted woods, and dust-filled halls abound in this story; all lorded over by the presence of Count Magnus. Much darker than most of the stories on this list, this one will chill you long into the night.



Robert Chambers has gotten a lot of attention after his works were cited as influencing “True Detective.” His Carcosa saga is definitely worth visiting, and this one is the best of them all. A deformed church employee, a forbidden book that drives people mad, a cosmic lord waiting to be born again – all of these elements, along with a tensely thick Gothic atmosphere, make this story perfect for October.

So, light your fire and don’t look out the window – these stories should keep you chilled this autumn. Stay tuned for a list of contemporary tales that evoke the same atmosphere.

(No photos/artwork used is my property – credit goes to the individual creators.)